Feedback on me+ my song

Soo im in such a good mood today!!! okay first of all let me tell you my yesterday's super sad story....here in my city there is an event (like the fahsion week just not that fashionable and talented to my opinion .. but still) and it is called "Plataforma K" and in eglish it would be something like K runway... i was going to the cast for models i mean believe me.. here the models are FUGLY and they look cheap and hoochie(mostly) because the colombia models are curvier than themodels we are used to see in Fashion TV hahahaha but im not i mean im almost fat at the chest.. well anyways i was too scared because i need to work out sooo much more and ive been eating soo many sweets .. i guess i thought (or still i do)that they arent gonna make me fat.. well yesterday was the last show and me and my friends got some tickets to go..but sadly i could go because i didnt had anyone to take me there... probably you are thinking something like .. really? what a silly reason!!! but i live in a really far away place and here in my city its not as easy as you'll think and teens (not counting myself) are not that independent like in any other part of the world.. I despise that...well finishing with the story i stay in my room feeling depressed ..... BUT today i went to the hair salon to get my hair done and that gave me a boost to my confidence! YEIII.. also i started researching for some sewing machines because finally my parent are starting to believe in me and my future! haha double yeii! hahah and last but not least.. i finally after month of looking for them, i found some jeggins!!!hahah and the funny part is that i didnt actually find them.. they found me... well ive got this "friend" and her mother sells cloths that someone brings from USA... so she told me today... now i really hope they arent too expensive because then my parent would not buy it for me!!( booh i hate to depend on them... why can't 16 year old people can't work in my country?.. thats too much BS!)
and the last part... is that maybe you dont know this but sometimes when im bored and i dont have a pencil(therefore i cant sketch) i start to write songs or emotions... it may sound lame but i enjoy it (pd: i got my inspiration from "Perfect You"
by Elizabeth Scott and some bits of my life.. so here it goes.. i hope you like it.

I walk by
You chase me
I chase back
You walk away

Im tired of this hunt
it drives me insane
in my throat there's a bump
of air turning into flames

are you the lion?
Im I the lamb?
i need someone to rely on
so you better fix your plans
are you the mouse?
Im i the cat?
are you feeling aroused?
we should work out this act!

are you performing this love
or is it real?
is this a lie?
or its actually how you feel?

Im not your type
thats ok
cause you are not mine

lets see how this goes
and if we want to..
we'll change our minds
are you the lion?
Im I the lamb?
i need someone to rely on
so you better fix your plans
are you the mouse?
Im i the cat?
are you feeling aroused?
we should work out this act!


And the Coolest news ever!! My sister is coming in a couple of weeks... im super exited because i dont get to see her as often as i wished.. and she is the sweetest, cutest lovable caring and coolest sister someone could have( not forgetting prettiest, beautiful and trendy).. i really feel super lucky for having her even though she doubles my age,she seems and acts way younger than she is which i also love... okay ill guess you want some details about our relationship? well we didnt get to spend a lot of time when i was a kid.. i mean when i was a baby and up until i was 5 she was there for me and i love her.. haha she used to put this minnie mouse or giraffe or any wacky makeup on me and i adored it!! but she went to live her live in a better place and she had to work very hard to be where she is now ( as you might guess i admire her sooo much and she has and always will be my role model.. no matter which decisions she makes i will always look up to her (haha omg my ayes are getting wet!!) well i last saw her in summer 2008 and i went to Miami and I am really gratefull because i really got to know her a lot better and even though ive change so much since we saw haha i will always be her cute shy but FASHIONISTA little sister hahah it would sound a little bit crazy but every time i think of her she makes me believe in my dreams and work harder to reach my goals... i really love her<3...